Tuesday 22 August 2017

Gus the Duck! By Apolosi

Learning Intention: I am learning to read.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I record a 8 sentence story called Gus the Duck.

3 comments:

  1. Hi there, my name is Fadlan and I am a student in room Manukau at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like the way that you explained the story really nice and clear. It made me think of something that I did very similar to this. Have you thought about adding a bit more text so it would be a longer story. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsfadlans.blogspot.co.nz.

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  2. Hi there, my name is Qais and I am a student in room Manukau at Waikowhai primary School. I really like how you have explained the story really well and not in a loud or quiet voice you just made it clear for me to read. It made me think of me making a story really similar to yours. Have you thought about add more details . If you would like to see my learning, my blog wpsqaiso.blogspot.co.nz.

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  3. Really nice poem Apolosi next time could you please put more in thanks

    come check out my blog at http://paroagreydeclynk.blogspot.co.nz/

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