Thursday, 31 March 2011

Guy Fawkes Day

Guy Fawkes Day Sub-Zero owned the cold, frozen night in Auckland. The sky was pitch dark, and the right sort of colour for fireworks to light it up on Guy Fawkes Night. Everyone was waiting for the crashes and the bangs. Suddenly…. Fireworks shot, Sky lit, Kids screamed. Bang! Bang! Bang! Crash! Boom!!! The grass lit up from the spinning cascades and dogs ran yelping around in fear and confusion at what was happening. “Don’t get too close to the fireworks,” the parents warned. The best fireworks had only begun. Benjamin
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14 comments:

  1. Room51 April 2011 at 18:11

    Benjamin
    The vocabulary in your writing made my mind explode with images! Brilliant work. I'll keep coming back to check what else you'e written.
    Mrs Manickum
    Room 5
    St Patrick's

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  2. Miss G3 April 2011 at 18:31

    Some great vocabulary choices here Benjamin, Well done. I look forward to reading more of your posts on your class blog.

    Miss G :-)

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  3. Benjamin Faitasi5 April 2011 at 20:40

    This is an amazing piece of writing,and its by me.

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  4. Agnes Faitasi5 April 2011 at 20:41

    AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  5. Anonymous5 April 2011 at 20:42

    You are very talented

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  6. naanise fale7 April 2011 at 16:17

    yeah Benjamin you are talented but i really mean your story is talented and IS AWESOME AND EXTRAORDINARY

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  7. Mum8 April 2011 at 18:43

    Well done Ben Keep writing good stories

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  8. Anonymous13 April 2011 at 18:01

    brilliant story

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  9. Anonymous15 April 2011 at 13:17

    lol, th whole family commntd :D

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  10. BEN18 April 2011 at 11:07

    I KNOW AYE!

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  11. Anonymous24 May 2011 at 21:58

    DEAR BEN .. you rock !!!!!!
    HERE COMES THE NEXT ROALD DAHL .. :D

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  12. Morris G29 June 2011 at 16:53

    ........(I'm speechless)

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  13. Anonymous10 August 2011 at 20:41

    cool

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  14. Anonymous10 August 2011 at 20:41

    what a story son

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