We are a Year 6 and 7 class at St Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. We are in Room 7 and our teacher is Mr. Bell.
Tuesday, 9 May 2017
This is an easy fruit salad recipe! By Rosie
Learning Intention: We are learning to write a procedure. Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I list the ingredients and the steps for making a fruit salad.
Hi there, my name is Lily and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai School. I really like the way you had very clear and simple steps. It made me think of the first time I made a meal for me and my family. Have you thought about Adding just some more detail so we can learn a bit more about it. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpslilyw. blogspot.co.nz.
Hi there, my name is Dorothy and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you have sequenced it and how you have added some attractive pictures. It made me think of when I had to make a fruit salad for all my siblings. Did you actually make it and taste it? Have you thought about putting more detail in and telling us more about what you did. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsdorothyb. blogspot.co.nz.
Hi there, my name is Amie and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you made it appealing to look at It sounds so yummy! It made me think of Eating my first fruit salad at this church. Have you thought about adding more information to your description so we know if you liked it or not? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsamiem.blogspot.co.nz/. Nice work! From:Amie
Hi Amie, thank you for your comment, I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
Hi there, my name is Ashana and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like that you have done it step by step and organised it. It made me think of when I was first trying fruit salad and it was yummy. Have you thought about adding more detail to your post like why you made the fruit salad? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsashanad.blogspot.co.nz/. From:Ashana
Hi Ashana, thank you for your comment, this was an activity that I did for reading. I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
Hi there, my name is Margaret and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai primary School. I really like how you have made a fruit salad and gave us an introducion of how to make it. I like how you added pictures in. It made me think of when I was at a family dinner and there was a fruit salad and it was really tasty. Have you thought about adding more detail and explaining more about the fruit salad. Like if you ate it or made it. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsmargarett.blogspot.co.nz.
Hi Margaret, thank you for your comment, I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
Hi there, my name is Jerry and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you put in pictures to show what it might look like. It made me think of when I tried to make fruit salad for school and then I put the fruit salad I made in the fridge,Then I came to get my fruit salad the next day but it got rotten in the fridge,”Good luck next time!” I said to myself. Have you thought about adding more detail?. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsJerryr. blogspot.co.nz.
Hi JerryR, thank you for your comment, I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
Hi there, my name is Mr Riceman and I am a teacher in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like the way you used numbers to clearly sequence the steps for the fruit salad. It made me think of the times that I have helped my own family make fruit salad at special gatherings. Have you thought about adding more of a description to say if you made this or not. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsriceman.blogspot.co.nz.
Hi Mr Riceman, thank you for your comment. This was an activity that I did for reading. I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
Hi there, my name is Alfred and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like that you made me hungry, And that you organised everything so it can be clear to read so if we want to make it we can read it. It made me think of Also it reminded me of when I had my family dinner. Have you thought about if you could do a description so we know what happen in the process. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsalfred.blogspot.co.nz.
Hi Alfred, thank you for your comment, I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
Hi there, my name is Pila and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai School. I really like that you made it look nice and how you showed us how to make It made me think of when i made my first cake. Have you thought about writing more thing and if you buyed the fruit and did you have a buddy. But nice work rose If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpspila blogspot.co.nz.
Hi Pila, thank you for your comment, I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
Hi there, my name is Anuk and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like the way you made it very clear to see what to do. It made me think of when I tried to make a fruit salad on my own. Have you thought about how it would taste if you were to add custard or yoghurt? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is: http://wpsanukw.blogspot.co.nz.
Hi Anuk, thank you for your comment. This was an activity that I did for reading, so it's not very descriptive. I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
Hi there, my name is Fadlan and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai primary School. I really like like the way that you had no spelling mistakes. It made me think of the times that me and my mum made a fruit salad for the whole family. Have you thought about adding detail about what you did? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsfadlans. blogspot.co.nz.
Hi Fadlan, thank you for your comment, I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
Hi there, my name is Oscar and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how organised it was, so it was easy to read. It made me think of when I went to a resort in the Philipines and I had a fruit salad in a coconut. Have you thought about adding plain yogurt or pineapple the next time you make it? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsoscarc. blogspot.co.nz
Hi there, my name is Jacob and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like that recipe. It looks delicious!. It made me think of when I once had a Christmas lunch with fruit salad. Have you thought about saying who made it and making more recipes like that, but with different fruits. If you did, I think you could make them into cereals and sell them! If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsjacobw.blogspot.co.nz.
Hi there, my name is Amaya and I am a student in room 8 at waikowhai primary School. I really like how you told us how many fruit we need and how many times we have to cut it. It made me think of the first time I made fruit salad with my family and friends. Have you thought about adding more detail about what you did. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wspamayap.blogspot.co.nz.
Hi Amaya, thank you for your comment, I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
Hi there, my name is QAIS and I am a student in room 8 at WAIKOWHAI PRIMARY School. I really like the way you have showed us how to do it when i take my Chromebook home i'm going to make it to because it looks really yum. It made me think of when i made my first fruit salad for everybody in my home. Have you thought about you thought about taking pictures and add more detail. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://WPSqaisblogspot.co.nz
Hi Qais, thank you for your comment. I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
I like the way you said the recipe will be put in order Hi there, my name is Romeo and I am a student in room 8 at waikowhai primary School. I really like I like the way you said the recipe will be put in order . It made me think of Delicious strawberry and bananas. Have you thought about Adding some mangoes . If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://. blogspot.co.nz.
Hi there, my name is Lily and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai School. I really like the way you had very clear and simple steps. It made me think of the first time I made a meal for me and my family. Have you thought about Adding just some more detail so we can learn a bit more about it. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpslilyw. blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteThank you Lily for your comment. I will continue to add more details to my work.
DeleteHi there, my name is Dorothy and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you have sequenced it and how you have added some attractive pictures. It made me think of when I had to make a fruit salad for all my siblings. Did you actually make it and taste it? Have you thought about putting more detail in and telling us more about what you did. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsdorothyb. blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteThank you Dorothy for your comment. I haven't had a chance to make my salad yet.
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Hi there, my name is Amie and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you made it appealing to look at It sounds so yummy! It made me think of Eating my first fruit salad at this church. Have you thought about adding more information to your description so we know if you liked it or not? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsamiem.blogspot.co.nz/. Nice work!
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Hi Amie, thank you for your comment, I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
DeleteHi there, my name is Ashana and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like that you have done it step by step and organised it. It made me think of when I was first trying fruit salad and it was yummy. Have you thought about adding more detail to your post like why you made the fruit salad? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsashanad.blogspot.co.nz/.
ReplyDeleteFrom:Ashana
Hi Ashana, thank you for your comment, this was an activity that I did for reading. I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
DeleteHi there, my name is Margaret and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai primary School. I really like how you have made a fruit salad and gave us an introducion of how to make it. I like how you added pictures in. It made me think of when I was at a family dinner and there was a fruit salad and it was really tasty. Have you thought about adding more detail and explaining more about the fruit salad. Like if you ate it or made it. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsmargarett.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi Margaret, thank you for your comment, I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
DeleteHi there, my name is Jerry and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you put in pictures to show what it might look like. It made me think of when I tried to make fruit salad for school and then I put the fruit salad I made in the fridge,Then I came to get my fruit salad the next day but it got rotten in the fridge,”Good luck next time!” I said to myself. Have you thought about adding more detail?. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsJerryr. blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi JerryR, thank you for your comment, I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
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ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Mr Riceman and I am a teacher in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like the way you used numbers to clearly sequence the steps for the fruit salad. It made me think of the times that I have helped my own family make fruit salad at special gatherings. Have you thought about adding more of a description to say if you made this or not. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsriceman.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi Mr Riceman, thank you for your comment. This was an activity that I did for reading. I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
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ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Alfred and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like that you made me hungry, And that you organised everything so it can be clear to read so if we want to make it we can read it. It made me think of Also it reminded me of when I had my family dinner. Have you thought about if you could do a description so we know what happen in the process. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is
ReplyDeletehttp://wpsalfred.blogspot.co.nz.
Hi Alfred, thank you for your comment, I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
DeleteHi there, my name is Pila and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai School. I really like that you made it look nice and how you showed us how to make It made me think of when i made my first cake. Have you thought about writing more thing and if you buyed the fruit and did you have a buddy. But nice work rose If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpspila blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi Pila, thank you for your comment, I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
DeleteHi there, my name is Anuk and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like
ReplyDeletethe way you made it very clear to see what to do. It made me think of when I tried to make a fruit salad on my own. Have you thought about how it would taste if you were to add custard or yoghurt? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is:
http://wpsanukw.blogspot.co.nz.
Hi Anuk, thank you for your comment. This was an activity that I did for reading, so it's not very descriptive. I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
DeleteHi there, my name is Fadlan and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai primary School. I really like like the way that you had no spelling mistakes. It made me think of the times that me and my mum made a fruit salad for the whole family. Have you thought about adding detail about what you did? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsfadlans. blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi Fadlan, thank you for your comment, I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
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DeleteHi there, my name is Oscar and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how organised it was, so it was easy to read. It made me think of when I went to a resort in the Philipines and I had a fruit salad in a coconut. Have you thought about adding plain yogurt or pineapple the next time you make it? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsoscarc. blogspot.co.nz
ReplyDeleteHi Oscar, thank you for your comment. Adding plain yoghurt and pineapple sounds delicious, I'll definitely give it a go next time.
DeleteHi there, my name is Jacob and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like that recipe. It looks delicious!. It made me think of when I once had a Christmas lunch with fruit salad. Have you thought about saying who made it and making more recipes like that, but with different fruits. If you did, I think you could make them into cereals and sell them! If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsjacobw.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi Jacob, thank you for your comment. I want to try different fruit next time and even with cereal, that sounds delicious!
DeleteHi there, my name is Amaya and I am a student in room 8 at waikowhai primary School. I really like how you told us how many fruit we need and how many times we have to cut it. It made me think of the first time I made fruit salad with my family and friends. Have you thought about adding more detail about what you did. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wspamayap.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi Amaya, thank you for your comment, I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
DeleteHi there, my name is QAIS and I am a student in room 8 at WAIKOWHAI PRIMARY School. I really like the way you have showed us how to do it when i take my Chromebook home i'm going to make it to because it looks really yum. It made me think of when i made my first fruit salad for everybody in my home. Have you thought about you thought about taking pictures and add more detail. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://WPSqaisblogspot.co.nz
ReplyDeleteHi Qais, thank you for your comment. I have more descriptions and explanations on my blog if you would like to see more of my writing spsrosiel.blogspot.com!
DeleteI like the way you said the recipe will be put in order
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Romeo and I am a student in room 8 at waikowhai primary School. I really like I like the way you said the recipe will be put in order
. It made me think of Delicious strawberry and bananas. Have you thought about Adding some mangoes
. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://. blogspot.co.nz.
Hi Romeo, thank you for your comment and suggestion, I will try to add different types of fruit next time!
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