Sunday, 13 September 2015

Hi Oli, want to have a sleepover at my house? By Aiden

On the weekend , my cousin came over for a sleepover. I hadn't had a sleepover in 4 weeks with anyone. I knew I was going to have a fun time. First we had to pick up Oli (cousin) from his house. When we got there, there were a lot of branches because they were cleaning up their garden (making it look amazing). When we were there it didn't look amazing, because they were in the middle of cleaning it. My auntie's mum was helping the. think we need her the next time we clean up our garden. We picked up Oli and went back to my house to have a memorable time. When we arrived back at my house we played on the P.C (computer). We played roblox because we have been playing with each other over the past week online. Roblox is an online website with games made by other people with roblox accounts. We played Speed run 4. Speed run 4 is a game with a number of different levels. our goal in the game is to pass all the levels and when you do, you get a badge. You collect badges from different roblox games. When Oli and I kept on losing, because it was too hard. Soon after that were off to church. My brother and I served while Oli sat with my sister and my dad. My brother,Oli and I drank the wine and ate the bread. The wine had a a strong taste and the bread tasted like an ice cream cone. Church was fun and the game that we played after was too glorious to speak of. It was the newest demo released on P.S.N (Play Station Network). It was F.I.F.A (Federation internationale de football association) 16. You can pre order the game on PS3, PS4 (Play Station 3 and 4) or Xbox 360 and Xbox One. We made a FUT (Fifa ultimate team) draft which is where you pick a player on the screen and make a full team and play as them against other teams. We made so many teams! We had the best time ever and I wanted for the sleepover to be everyday. I really liked having fun with Oli. I hope we can have another sleepover next week. We are learning to understand and use descriptive language. I know this when I use adjectives to make my writing more interesting.

2 comments:

  1. Wow sounds like you had an amazing sleepover with your family. Hope you get to do it again soon.
    I enjoyed reading your story because of all the descriptive words you used. That is how I know you had a great weekend Aiden.
    Well done keep up the great work

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  2. Wow sounds like you had an amazing sleepover with your family. Hope you get to do it again soon.
    I enjoyed reading your story because of all the descriptive words you used. That is how I know you had a great weekend Aiden.
    Well done keep up the great work

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