Tuesday, 5 April 2016

Let's drink the wrong water! By Kyle

Learning Intention: We are learning to write develop creative thinking skills through letter writing.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I write a letter to the publisher suggesting a different plot to the story 'We've flown past Mars'.

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Kyle,
    The title of your letter "Let's drink the wrong water" captured my eyes, but then as I read your letter it sounded so adventurous and interesting because of the aliens, dinosaurs and the other vocabulary you used. If you made the rocket image on your letter I think it is very creative.
    Keep up the good work!

    Amanda

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  2. Kia Ora Kyle,
    The title of your letter "Let's drink the wrong water" captured my eyes, but then as I read your letter it sounded so adventurous and interesting because of the aliens, dinosaurs and the other vocabulary you used. If you made the rocket image on your letter I think it is very creative.
    Keep up the good work!

    Amanda

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