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Hi there, my name is Fadlan and I am a student in room Manukau at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like the way that you explained the story really nice and clear. It made me think of something that I did very similar to this. Have you thought about adding a bit more text so it would be a longer story. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsfadlans.blogspot.co.nz.
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