We are a Year 6 and 7 class at St Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. We are in Room 7 and our teacher is Mr. Bell.
Friday 26 May 2017
Want to know how to make fruit salad! By Pauline
Learning Intention: We are learning to write a procedure. Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I list the ingredients and the steps for making a fruit salad.
Talofa Lava Pauline, my name is Alfred and I am a student in room Manukau at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you made me hungry because I like to eat food and I also like that you explained to us on how to make the Fruit Salad. It made me think of how people always have a family dinner because I always have Fruit Salad but without tomato and lettuce because I don’t like them. Have you thought about giving use more of a description after you giving us the instructions. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsalfredk,blogspot.co.nz.
Hi Pauline. I am Sinead and I am a student from Paroa school. I read your recipe and I liked your recipe because you showed us what it will look like but the photo is a bit small and maybe you should ad another photo. This reminds me about the fruit salad I made once. To visit my blog, go to http://paroagreysineadf.blogspot.co.nz/.
Talofa Lava Pauline, my name is Alfred and I am a student in room Manukau at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you made me hungry because I like to eat food and I also like that you explained to us on how to make the Fruit Salad. It made me think of how people always have a family dinner because I always have Fruit Salad but without tomato and lettuce because I don’t like them. Have you thought about giving use more of a description after you giving us the instructions. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsalfredk,blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi Pauline. I am Sinead and I am a student from Paroa school. I read your recipe and I liked your recipe because you showed us what it will look like but the photo is a bit small and maybe you should ad another photo. This reminds me about the fruit salad I made once.
ReplyDeleteTo visit my blog, go to http://paroagreysineadf.blogspot.co.nz/.