Monday, 31 July 2017

Pete's Sheep! By Apolosi

Learning Intention: I am learning to read.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I record an eight sentence story.


  1. Shalom Room 7 my name is Jerry R from Waikowhai Primary School. I like the fact that you wanted to share your learning. When I saw this it reminded me of the time I tried to do a screencastify and failed a lot! Maybe next time you post you could use a paragraph or 2 explaining your work? If you want to see my blog it is Yours sincerely Jerry R

  2. Kia Ora Room 7, my name is Dorothy and I go to Waikowhai Primary School. I really like your blog post because you added in voice and words. I also think you did a great job on punctuation. Next time you could try to add into your blog a description on why you did it. This reminds me of when I couldn't go to sleep so I tried counting sheep. It didn't really work. If you have extra time I would love it if you checked out my learning blog at