Try to keep up with your team! By Immanuel

Soccer is a sport that keeps you fit. It’s a game played between two teams of five players and the players have a netted soccer goal at each end of the court.

In Soccer, the players have to get into their positions and the main position is the goal keeper. The goal keeper passes the ball so that his or her team mates can get a goal in at the other end.

Then the person with the ball has to try and get away from the person that is marking them. If the person without the ball kicks the person with the ball, it’s called a “Foul”. The person that got kicked without the ball gets a free shot.

Soccer is very important because it keeps you fit and healthy. Soccer helps us to build body strength. Soccer is not a sport that everyone can play, you have to train hard to keep up with your team. Soccer is a popular sport in Brazil.

WALT write an explanation writing using the correct structure.

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Do you know your place values? By Immanuel

WALT identify place value of whole numbers.

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Mission day! By Immanuel

WALT advertise for Mission Day.
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Valentines with my family! By Immanuel

On Sunday, we went to my baby cousin’s baptism. He got baptised in the church. Father Roach baptised him by washing away his sins with the holy water. After he washed baby Luke on the head, we made the sign of the cross. After we had the baptism, we took photos of him. He was like a popular person because people kept on taking photos of him. My cousin and I went into the car while this was going on.

After that, we went home to get our jackets because it was raining outside. While we were inside, I went to get my cousin’s iPad. When I was on the iPad, I downloaded a game from the app store. The game that I downloaded was called ‘Dead trigger’. Then my Mum called my cousin and I because we were going to Valentines for lunch.

When we got to Valentines, I was happy because it was a long drive there. My parents paid for us and then we walked inside. There was a lot of food for us to eat when I walked in. There was sushi, chicken and many more yummy food. We went to go find a table. The kids found a long oval-shaped table. We said our prayers before we went to get our food.

I got sushi, prawn, fish, chicken and chips with tomato sauce. I took a bite of everything and it was yummy. When I finished the savory food, I went to get chocolate eclair, some ice cream, jelly and a piece of fruit for dessert. It was rich and sweet. After I ate my dessert, I went to go get a hot chocola It was puffy on the inside.

Then my parents had a little talk with Father. The kids went outside to go and see the goldfish. There were two goldfish in the pond and they were swimming around. They were orange and yellow. The first time I looked in the pond, I thought they were rocks.Then my Mum came out and said ''We are all going now''. I hope I come back to Valentines again.

WALT write a recount with adjectives and adverbs to make my writing more interesting. 
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