Monday, 25 December 2017

Click here to view my description of Polyfest! By Leolupe

  • Polyfest is packed with happy, joyful children and adults.
  • The music coming from the Maori stage sounds very alluring.
  • Watching the performances is like sitting in a cinema watching an action movie.
  • The food smells so delicious, just like being in a cafe that is filled with chocolate.
  • The Polynesian students looks very charming and elegant in their costumes.
  • The bright colours of the students' costumes attracts everyone's attention.
  • The sound of children cheering for their friends and families fills the air with joy.
Learning Intention: We are learning to write a description.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write seven descriptive sentences to describe the  Polynesian Festival.

1 comment:

  1. Hi my name is Raemynjay I am a year five student from Edmund Hillary School. I like to go to the Poly fest in Auckland i always go to the Kapahaka stage
    .You are right Poly fest is packed with happiness and joy. If you'd like to come see my blog here it is