Sunday, 24 December 2017

The enormous fairytale castle looked magnificent! By Angelina M

  • The enormous fairytale castle looked magnificent with exciting decorations in the large magical halls.
  • It is fancy with marvellous fairytale characters and mind blowing flags on the walls.
  • The food in the fairytale castle smells beautiful like grapes growing on trees.
  • There is the burnt crispy smell of pigs roasting on the spit.
  • There are many colourful fairies flying around the castle like the rainbow shimmering in the sky.
Learning Intention: We are learning to write a description.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write five descriptive sentences to describe a fairytale castle.

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