- The supermarket is filled with children and adults who are shopping and talking loudly, so loud that it sounds like lions snoring.
- You can feel the chill as you walk down the frozen aisles, so chilly that you can turn into a snowman.
- The healthy fruit and vegetable aisles smell fresh and clean.
- Behind the supermarket there is a strong smell of rotten fruit and rubbish.
- The supermarket aisles are filled with food like chips, canned fruit and bread.
- It is also filled with drinks like fanta, L&P, Coke, Sprite ans water
Learning Intention: We are learning to write a description.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write six descriptive sentences with appropriate adjectives to describe the supermarket and record it using screencastify.
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ReplyDeleteKi-a-ora my name is Quin from kawakawa primary school I realy like how you discribed the super market. What is your next step.
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