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Friday, 3 November 2017

Feabus is a very bad cat! By Kyle

Learning Intention: We are learning to develop our understanding of text using Reciprocal Reading strategies.
Success Criteria:I know I can do this when I describe Fleabus using screencastify.

6 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Saint Patrick's School, my name is Amie I am a student in Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how you made a screencastify about Fleabus the cat, I also like how you used descriptive words. It made me think about a cat that is carrying a lot of flea because it has the word flea in it, and it is like a bus carrying objects. Have you thought about adding a bigger description of why you had to write about cats? If you would like to see my learning my blog is http://wpsamiem.blogspot.co.nz/ . Great job!
    From: Amie

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  2. Hello, my name is Lily in Te Waka Ako which is at Waikowhai Primary school. I enjoyed how you used photos and described Fleabus. It made me think of when 2 years ago we had to make a monster, describe it and make a back story. Maybe next time you could add a description but other then that is great. If you would like to look at my learning search up http://wpslilyw.blogspot.co.nz/. Thank you for your time.
    Lily

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  3. Hi there my name is Ashana I am a student in Te Wako Ako, I really like your post about the cat because I really like cat's so that was so interesting. It reminds me of my cat's that I have a home there not really like that but sometimes. Maybe next time you could add a slide of you describing the cat in each slide what it does then you could talk about them. If you would like to see my learning blog it is http://wpsashanad.blogspot.co.nz/.
    Thanks for reading
    BLOG YOU LATER!!!
    From: Ashana

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  4. Hi Kyle
    My name is Coco, I am from Waikowhai primary school, I like the way you describe about the bad cat. It reminded me about my cat in China, Maybe next time you can write more words and speak loudly.

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  5. Hi Kyle my name is Qais and I am student in Manukau at Waikowhai Primary School. I like the way you have explained about Fleabus the cat. It made me think of once when I was doing a document of a cat.
    Next time you should add more stuff about Fleabus like what colour he is and other stuff. If you would like to see my blog it is http://wpsqaiso.blogspot.co.nz/.

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  6. Malo, my name is Amaya I am a student of Waikowhai Primary School in Te Waka Ako. I liked the way you talked loud so we could hear you clearly. It reminds me of when I was in room 10 and when we had to do descriptive writing. Have you thought about adding a reflection about what you found hard and what you found easy. If you would like to check out my learning blog visit http://wpsamayap.blogspot.co.nz/

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