Tuesday 21 November 2017

The poles is as white as a shiny tooth! By Angelina M

  1. The poles are as empty as an eaten tuna from a can.
  2. The poles are beautiful like the stars that shine in the night.
  3. It is  as white as a shiny tooth.
  4. The poles is so cold that whoever goes there will freeze on their second step.
  5. It is so windy that you feel like you are going to be blown away like a balloon.
  6. The icebergs are so icy that everything slips.
Learning Intention: We are learning to write a description.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I use 6 descriptive sentences to describe the poles.

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