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Monday, 13 November 2017

The haunted house is so creepy that it makes you want to run out of it as soon as you enter! By Roneeza

The haunted house looks frightening and horrifying.
It feels sinister, bone-chilling and spine-tingly.
The haunted house is shadowy as if something is going to jump out.
It smells damp and dusty.
The haunted house is very quiet.


Learning Intention: We are learning to write descriptions.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write descriptive sentences using appropriate adjectives to describe a haunted house.

1 comment:

  1. hi xavier from paroa this is a good pice of wrighting the way you described how you feel is awsome when i read it i could see how you feel.

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