We are a Year 6 and 7 class at St Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. We are in Room 7 and our teacher is Mr. Bell.
Wednesday 1 November 2017
The water park in Papatoetoe was fun! By Christopher
Learning Intention: We are learning to write a recount. Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I record a verbal recount of my trip to the water park using Webcam.io.
Kia Ora, my name is Dorothy and I am a student at Waikowhai Primary School in Te Waka ako. I really like your blog post about your trip to the water park. You have explained the 5w's and 1h. You described everything really well. Maybe next time you could work on writing a little description too. It reminded me of Parakai pools which is also a pools with slides. Did you go in the Holidays? I would also love it if you checked out my blog at http://wpsdorothyb.blogspot.co.nz/ Thanks for sharing your amazing learning with me! Blog u later!
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Kia Ora, my name is Dorothy and I am a student at Waikowhai Primary School in Te Waka ako. I really like your blog post about your trip to the water park. You have explained the 5w's and 1h. You described everything really well. Maybe next time you could work on writing a little description too. It reminded me of Parakai pools which is also a pools with slides. Did you go in the Holidays? I would also love it if you checked out my blog at http://wpsdorothyb.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your amazing learning with me!
Blog u later!